Rare Pair Shorts

Oooooohhhhh!!! Gaaaaahhhh!!!! Strange is good, strange is definitely good! And this is SO freaking good! :D Thank you so much for writing another fic for me for this event! Another lovely cousincest fic! <333 This just made my day and made me giggle - for some obscure reason - and made me shiver a bit, too. Lovely, lovely job!

First of all, I love your characterisation of the two of them. I love that Rose is the Slytherin and Al the Gryffindor, and I love how cunning and sly she is compared to her good-hearted and naive cousin. At the same time, I love the fact that she definitely has a soft spot for him, because you're right, she doesn't look like she is too keen on messing up with him. I really like how much he is in love with her and what he'd do for her, and even though she is sneaky enough to manipulate Albus in order to obtain his help in the Tournament, I kind of really like their relationship! It's not too cold and she is not too mean-spirited with him.

I like the situation you depict here. I like where they are and what they are doing. I love the fact that Rose is in her underwear painting her nails, and that she is basically torturing Albus. And I love how much in love with her he is - I've already said that, but I want to say that again and again. He is adorkable and sweet and I have a feeling that they'll be a great couple after all - they complement each other. They look a bit like Hermione/Ron in my head. *g*

I also love the dialogues here and the fact that all of Abus' questions are actually statements and how much characterisation you manage to convey through them - and I'm not even talking about the dialogue tags that you use. Very good job for a great choice of words! :D And LMAO at the ending! I am torn between believing Rose and thinking that she's just messing further with Albus, but I loved his reaction to that piece of information! So much fun and a great way to finish the story!

The kiss was adorable. I really liked that she was smiling and that she was pressing herself against him and that he was reacting to it. I do want to see what happens next and if she keeps true to her promise.. ;) Lots of sexy times ahead, I bet.. Gaaaaahhhh! Feel free to post this on AO3, too!! And by the way, the Lily/Hugo you posted on AO3, you might want to change the relationship tag from Lily Luna Potter & Hugo Weasley to Lily Luna Potter/Hugo Weasley to get more views? It's just a suggestion. :D I do want all the people to know it's there and I want them to read it! <333 Thank you again and again and again! You made my day! xxxx