Date: 2011-12-06 08:01 pm (UTC)
Oh, surprise! :D So close to the end, I was expecting a lot more angsty drama from you, but there are still some pieces to come, so I should enjoy that short piece of... some kind of happiness. :D

I like how Zacharias copes with what happened to Marietta's face. I might have expected some actual disgust, but I', glad he likes her enough not to care about her appearance. And, well, Zacharias totally tricked me with that bit about Cedric. :D You get so easily over-flowed with pairings in fics sometimes that I was sceptical of the origins of his obsession. It is extremely strongly implied, though, so if Marietta might have thought it was true then she would have felt an even stronger connection to Zacharias because of that. He might have just destroyed that. Look, now I'm searching for the angst. *shakes head*

Well, great job! And I liked your use of the prompt! Fred and George's fireworks also add some romantic atmosphere for Zacharias and Marietta. :)
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