Date: 2010-02-16 01:28 am (UTC)
This was perfect! Your characterisation was so spot-on. he ending was so sweet too <3
Picking his best friend as Keeper wasn’t the worst thing he could have done but it was certainly in the top five.- I grinned at this! Your Minerva was so perfect; crisp, cutting and witty.
You've developed Rolanda's character into something great, cheeky and spunky, she really came alive for me.
Well done love :)
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