Date: 2010-02-17 08:07 am (UTC)
I love the rhythm of this. It's quiet, it doesn't shout, and the brief alternating sections give a sort of ebb and flow that is compelling. I really liked Pansy's thoughts about Neville in the last section, and to me that last line actually felt like it might be the start of something rather than a definitive goodbye – but maybe that's just me being a hopeless romantic. :)
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