Date: 2009-09-01 07:31 am (UTC)
I like the interaction between all the characters here. It's all very real and even the scenario makes sense for someone burned. (I like the way you pay attention to the burns, most writers ignore them.) You imply all sorts of possible futures, yet the moment works alone for the story. I'm sorry I only found this now.
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