Date: 2009-07-04 07:38 am (UTC)
I don't mind at all that you turned it into an angsty piece at all!

Oh gosh, this does break my heart though. The imagery was great, and poor Charlie! :( I love what you did with the prompt, actually, and the flashback was so sweet (and sad!)

Really liked this line, among others: He thinks he wants to kiss her, he realizes it's not the first time he's wanted to do so.

Thank you for this! ♥
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