Date: 2008-12-21 01:46 am (UTC)
I like all of the drabbles, but I love the last two, especially. Silly Oliver - he would fall asleep in a library.

Breathing shallowly through his mouth, Marcus moved along the bookcases.

For some reason, I really like this line, as well as the image it creates. I don't really know why, except that when I imagine Marcus, I imagine him to be the type to breathe that way. XD

Anyway, great work! To_hellxweride will love these. :D
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