Date: 2008-12-24 10:12 pm (UTC)
I can't believe I never commented on this. I remembering reading it and being like "Wow" too.

Not only are the pictures just beautiful--the first one's my favorite, with the lipstick stain on the cup, and tarot cards and everything-- but the story is very poignant. I don't normally like Lavender, but I adored your take on her. And the story just had me holding my breath the whole way through, dying to know what happened.

Aside from all "THE WAR" stuff, which was just GREAAAATTT, I really liked this line: Seamus has tried and failed, tried and failed; he’s still lost, still in ruin and confusion. But he hasn’t stopped being alive deep down beneath the somnific layers of winter. There’s no excuse for not clambering, fighting and bleeding, to reach the edges of sunlight. Mmm very smooth and powerful.

And I love the last line. :]

...I can't believe I didn't figure out that this was you! I reread it now and can tell, but the first time through I just remember really liking it and wondering who put in so much time and effort to photoshop + do tarot card research. haha.
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