Date: 2008-12-19 12:26 am (UTC)
This is just lovely, and it breaks my heart! Oh, the scene at the wedding--Sirius being too late in confessing his love but doing it anyway. This bit just about killed me, because it just perfectly encompasses the dynamics between Sirius, James, and Lily: Ten minutes later, he was sobbing to her about how wonderful she was, and how he wished it was him. How he'd admired her for so long, but had first thought she might fancy Snape and then James had said he fancied her. And it was James, James was his best mate, he couldn't do it to James.

I loved this entire thing. I liked how it spanned from beginning to end, and end was perfect. Oh gosh, I'm not sure whether I should be sad or angry. I'm both.

Thank you so much! ♥ This was just about everything I wanted & more. :] (And the bit of flattery in the author's notes was much appreciated too! haha, thanks. -blush-)
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