http://darkhairedgirl.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] darkhairedgirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rarepair_shorts2016-08-03 09:31 pm

FICLET: the sound of your loneliness (Justin/Pansy)

Title: the sound of your loneliness
Pairing: Justin Finch-Fletchley/Pansy Parkinson
Prompt: take your pick
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2195
Summary: “She forgets, sometimes, that she’s just a piece of furniture to some of these people, a House-Elf who should be seen and not heard.”
Author's Notes: Part 5 of 13. Title and inspiration comes from the Fleetwood Mac song “Dreams.”
Link to Prompt Table: Here!

(what you've had, and what you lost)

[identity profile] orlando-switch.livejournal.com 2016-08-04 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this story very much. They are suited in an unexpected way. I am glad there are still a lot of chapters coming.

[identity profile] orlando-switch.livejournal.com 2016-08-06 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
I look forward to it. I think what makes them work is that they have more in common than they might realize. Pansy is a social climber, groomed to be in pureblood circles and with Justin being a baronet or something like that, they are broadly raised in the same way.
What I also find interesting is that Pansy is in a lot of stories paired with someone strong to reign in her feistyness, while in your story she much more needs someone caring and steady to anchor her.