http://stgulik.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] stgulik.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rarepair_shorts 2018-01-12 03:32 pm (UTC)

This was a very sweet moment by the fire. I liked way you used all dialogue and almost no narrative. You just set the scene and let your characters play it out uninterrupted. It made the proposal feel authentic. Thank you for sharing, MA.

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