http://lenapinewoods.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lenapinewoods.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rarepair_shorts 2018-01-16 07:48 pm (UTC)

Oh this was so beautiful! I really liked your characterization, and your style in general. This part was my favorite: "That night, Ginny had woken up with a start. The bedroom had seemed big. Her surroundings had taken two steps back. Pansy, who had had her hand on Ginny’s stomach, had felt far away. Ginny hadn’t been able to feel Pansy’s warmth. Everything had been muted. She’d had dreams more vivid than this." So raw and delicate and beautiful and real. Thank you for sharing!

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