Lovely! Yes, very well done, the ache and the cuteness and the humour. That moment in the kiss really moved me. I loved the detail of the shawl flowing away, I could just picture it, just as I loved the memory of them sneering at Hannah's shoes and Pansy's dilemma with Daphne's legs (and her solution). So much established about the characters in such tiny details - brilliant!
And I think the pairing works very well. I liked a Pansy that's not beautiful, like in canon.
Congratulations!