Wow! You've created a rich and complex world for these characters. I'm intrigued by the various offers and contracts and choices everyone was making. Interesting take with Parvati's defense of the role of concubines too. Reminded me of Firefly!

Daphne remarks with the slow drawl of a Slytherin. The kind only one of Professor Snape’s students could learn. Loved this line.

Thanks so much for writing for me, especially a story featuring Parvati as the lead character! She's one of my absolute favorites and doesn't get nearly enough love. <3