http://demented-mei.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] demented-mei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rarepair_shorts 2014-08-28 05:17 am (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful! :) I'm always very twitchy about how Luna is written, but she's absolutely perfect in this. I love how you've got Charlie comparing her to every other girl without it coming across like she's just flat out weird.

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