Oh my God, I love it! I love your thoughts on ghosts, the way they spend forever, the passing along of stories at Deathday Parties, it's brilliant. Your Baron voice is splendid, I like how he looks down on Nick and the Ravenclaw students, it really seems to suit him. And the relationship between he and Helena is so great, the reluctance on her part is very canonical and yet I can feel something else behind it that's quite intriguing. Very well done!