I really loved reading this series (and am glad that I could read it all in one go)! The transition between Marietta's feelings for Cho and her feelings for Zacharias felt very natural and real to me – especially considering she's not entirely over Cho yet, but she wants to be, and will be soon. I've never read much Marietta before, but I love the way you wrote her (and the way you wrote Zacharias, too), making her betrayal of the DA seem much more justified. (Or if not justified, then explained.)