Thank you, mystery author! I'm pleased you chose this pairing to tackle! I really love the motivations you've given it. I particularly love the first person point of view; I think the tone is great! The first two sections are my favorite.
And I love where you've set it in the time line as well! Actual Death Eater Snape is awesome.
Inculding the rhyme into the whole is was even better; very clever idea, and I like how it all weaves together.
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And I love where you've set it in the time line as well! Actual Death Eater Snape is awesome.
Inculding the rhyme into the whole is was even better; very clever idea, and I like how it all weaves together.
Great job!