ext_23085 ([identity profile] kellychambliss.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rarepair_shorts 2010-02-15 03:26 pm (UTC)

Very well done; I like the matter-of-fact, yet IC way each one faces his/her situation; I like the fact that you don't explain too much what each one's trouble is; I like the way you use the landscape to mirror the characters' mental states. The ending is just as it ought to be, given the way Neville and Pansy have developed. I think my favorite section is the last one -- all those thoughts are so exactly Pansy.

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