Yaaaaay! I'm so proud to read your slash first time. :D It's always special to read how someone discovers the depths of it.

And I loved your beginning. It's such a nice tradition to start with the Hogwarts Express... and being unable to forget the other's eyes. I like your Amos very much. He's such an outgoing person, or at least tries to be. He wanted to change over the summer, probably, and mean, mean Lucius is so cold. I can't wait for them to exchange even more words.

Liked it very much! :D But you already know how happy you make me with writing this pair!