ext_23085 ([identity profile] kellychambliss.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rarepair_shorts 2010-02-13 10:21 pm (UTC)

Very nice -- not fluffy, but just enough hope. They're all wonderfully characterized, even Caelum with his longest-sentence-ever. I like Seamus's sense of humor, his honesty, the whole cash/cache gag. This section in particular sums up just what I like about the characters and tone:

Pansy rolled her eyes. “Cache, Finnigan, Cache. You’d think someone had tied your tongue. Just make sure you say it right. I don’t want my son ending up in a vault at Gringotts.”

Seamus grinned. “Sure thing. Hey, I bet this’ll piss Malfoy off, eh?”

Pansy raised an eyebrow. “Think you can handle it?”

“Do banshees scream?”


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