I've enjoyed what you've written and was on the look out for the next installment, so I was very happy to see this one surface. Cho seems to be the sensitive girl she is in canon. Marietta is herself. I like your Neville; he's not the type to make scenes. And he's probably been thinking about this conversation all along. Their personalities match together remarkably well. I can't wait to see your next post. I would like to see Neville's perspective on this whole thing. (Actually I might gloat to see Cho return to Marietta and tell her how he took things.)