ext_155278 ([identity profile] cesaretech.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rarepair_shorts 2008-09-19 02:30 am (UTC)

Marietta's certainly retained her rotten personality, and I liked how you wrote it. Very much a contrast to Cho's more understanding and tolerance. It's good to see this from Cho's perspective, especially her reaction to Neville's advance. I look forward to seeing how this transfers from friendship to relationship. Good work.

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